Semicolon or period after “attention” 

Comma splice after “birds.” Also, put in “that” after the third line. 

(Source: whatkatjasaid)

She sure gets around!  

(Source: labelmeillest)

Replace the comma with a semicolon or the word “because.” 

*happened

I applaud you for your “you’re” use.  Consider punctuation.  

rachelplatten:

Tis true, tis true.

*lose 

After “original,” I suggest a semicolon or the word “so.” 

(Source: a-v-o-k-a-d-o)

byefacebookhellotumblr:

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You’re missing a comma between “overthink” and “just.” 

Congratulations on using the correct form of “it’s.” 

I don’t like your attitude and I don’t like your punctuation. 

(Source: yanilavigne.net)